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Apr 12, 2010
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a whistle in the dark
==
a whistle
in the dark
suffering does not
belong to me; suffering
calls on everyone;
the time to remind
myself of that is when I'm
full of suffering;
yes, that
is best,
I think;
and if I'm not right
about that, I won't worry
over it: at
least one other thought
will find me in time to adjust;
tell me if I'm wrong,
please
==
— barbsdad2003, Apr 12, 2010
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loved
16 years 2 months ago
to suffer
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Suffering and love is the
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Chuck
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I read your comment to Cat
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
Exquisite use of punctuation and enjambment
barbsdad2003
16 years 2 months ago
Always ...
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
May I say I echo all the
barbsdad2003
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you
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