im a dark angel who doesn't understand

I was a dark angel sent from bellow,
I was the dark angel waiting to grow,
I was the dark angel pondering where to go,
I was the dark angel looking for a pathway to follw,
I was the dark angel with questtions,
I was the dark angel whos questions were looking for truth,
Searching for who I was,
My reason for living,

I dont understand,
Why people cry,
Why people get angry,
Why people hate,
But most of all,
Why people are prejudiced,
Why people fight,
Why people argue,
Why people cheat,
What I understand most,
As the dark angel I was and am is,
HOW.


                                  -Ash Knight-
                                        aka
                                 -Poet_Laurete-

— Dark.Poetress, Apr 12, 2010

Critiques

Electric Blue

16 years 2 months ago

Dark Angel

Ash Knight Great I just love this feel everything so deep into my soul When did you see into my soul and see these questions and answers As for me too asking WHY Why am I here for what for who what is my reason to be alive if dead already be why am i here only to feel pain and then it starts all over again. people make promises but break them so easily they lie they cheat they break your heart so why do I feel at all Dark Angel I too am in Hell Dark Angel where is the magic spell always Electric Blue

Dark.Poetress

16 years 2 months ago

Electric Blue, It was

Electric Blue, It was actually made for the reason of everyones questions like you have produced for me.Being 13 I always have questions,but being a 13 year old who is more of an adult,I have no problem answering questions for others. If it was in your soul we are proably on the same wave length there ^-^ it was just the way my soul felt when I was writing this one.The day I finally got away from my life as the nightmare it was is when I found these questions and answers. I do hope they are entertaining. I can not answer those questions for you for I do not know where your heart and mind lay.But I dare say they are very good questions to be asked,and obviously by a very observent person. Peace, Ash Knight,Poet_Laurete,Dark angel

Electric Blue

16 years 2 months ago

Dark Angel

Ash Knight My friend I read you poem and felt you were asking questions that I had asked myself many times. We do find answers come when not expected and they have come to me to ease my pain but i do a lot of soul searching great write my friend Electric blue

Dark.Poetress

16 years 2 months ago

Electric Blue

my friend I have asked myself the same questions a million times,I am glad that they can ease the pain of others,it doesn't work like that for me that way,if you look at my profile and at my bio you will find out some of why.I think,when people do soul searching and succed,that they find a part of themselves they never knew was missing so kudos to you my friend. thanks ^-^ Ask Knight Dark Angel Poet_Laurete

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