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Empathy
There are few people
in the world today
who care for others
with empathy as you do
Anyone who’s part of your world
feels honoured
to spend time with you.
Birds, they come to rest
on your windowsill
They tap their beaks on the glass
with insistence
When you open your window
they don’t fly away
in your presence.
Stray cats are drawn to you
instinctively unafraid
Waiting in the shadows
for a special treat
you share love
as they settle
warmly at your feet.
A fox on the run
stops to look at you
its long pointed mouth
looks like a smile
It turns to flee
the foxhunt, you cringe
believing hunters are vile.
Homeless people
all know you by name
you give them your heart
as well as food
Someone like you
and everything you do
is all for the greater good.
There’s a special place
that God keeps warm
for his blessed elite
A halo of light
radiates from your existence
and leaves its energy
on everyone you meet.
Critiques
Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
Exquisite,
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Lovely compliment
DawningDaytripper
16 years 2 months ago
I loved that flow and feel
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Julie
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Aww you wrote a poem about
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Awe..you guessed?
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Agreed :) My empathy alone
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Too true.Rosina xena465
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
We can try to teach the
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Rosina
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks JayCee
barbsdad2003
16 years 2 months ago
Hi!
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Chuck
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
My dear Indi
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
lovely write rosina
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Judy
shirley harrison
16 years 2 months ago
empathy
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Too true Shirley
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
This is a really nice one Xena
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks so much Mona for your
Millage
16 years 2 months ago
Wow!
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
That’s very kind of you.
loved
16 years 2 months ago
best dog
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks for the stars
loved
16 years 2 months ago
SPOT LIGHT What??????
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
This is nice too
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Empathetic… is the
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Yes I am. Thank you
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
I thank you compassionate Rosina
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Amen to that Ann
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