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Falling Apart.

The plan you've laid out
Mind already made up
You'll end your life

Mind creates scene
Standing there with knife
The pain sears in my soul

You beg me to withhold
I cry endless tears
I feel the world crushing me.

Twisting distorted
Sleepless nights
Inability to consume.

Lovingly I tell another.
I loose you forever.
Saving you from yourself.

I've lost your friendship, but I've saved you.
— sunscreen, Apr 12, 2010

Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful Alex

If anyone can save a life it's you my dear friend. Rosina xena465

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