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Government as God

Government as God

In the beginning freedom abounded
Then the government said
Let there be law
and the people saw this and it was good

On the second day the government said
Let there be taxes
The people saw this and found it necessary

On the third day the government said
Let there be regulation of commerce
and the people thought it needed

On the fourth day the government said
There are poor among us we must help
So once more they increased taxes
The people were divided

On the fifth day the government said
Insurance prices are high and we should provide
Let us take care of you, it will only be right
The people balked at the higher costs
Yet they were forced to accept

On the sixth day the government said
You can't do this, you can't eat that
and the old are a burden on society
They are not productive so they are undeserving
and they were allowed to die
all but the young were outraged

On the seventh day the government said
Nothing at all, just smiled with a warm glow
satisfied they had total control and their continuation
was assurred as long as they could keep them dependent
and their position was good
Amen
— Rett, Apr 12, 2010

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Rett

Rett

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Barbara

Just thought I would be a little provocative. *S* Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 2 months ago

Paw, very funny. I know how

Paw, very funny. I know how strongly you feel. I don't agree, your predicitons are.. yours. I will just say I liked how you equated it to creation. And that it was well written. I love it when you post. Thanks for sharing Paw! Julie D.D.
Rett

Rett

16 years 2 months ago

Ah daughter

Glad you weighed in. ((hugs)) We can agree to disagree. I appreciate you weighing in. I thought I would be a little provocative for a change. I haven't done so in a while. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Rett

I would send this into every Major newspaper in america, its brilliant .. only one thing? fifth day insteed of fith day lol just a tiny thing ... love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
Rett

Rett

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Jayne

I appreciate it very much. I fixed the little problem and thanks so much for pointing it out. Sometimes your brain just automatically corrects an error unconsciously. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
Rett

Rett

16 years 1 month ago

Hmm, thought I answered this

Musta been my part timers acting up. *L* Thanks Indi. I am not a big fan of intrusive gov'ment as you can tell. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
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prayersbyPatty

16 years 1 month ago

Hey Rett you still her and don't like taxes still????

Not sure I liked the creation part... after all you know how I love the choir... still singing.... But the part about the government I can totally agree with.... they should re-name the government corrupt mafia... they are taking all but the money I use to buy bread n butter...so I give you a five for your attitude... we are the Russians......... Duck and cover congress is on the move.... Patty
Rett

Rett

16 years 1 month ago

Hi Patty, good to see you!

Nope, I still don't like taxes and liking the intrusive government even less as time goes by. Back in the USSR! Thanks for the read. I still like to stir the pot a little. *G* Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin

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