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Apr 13, 2010
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Stolen Innocence
Those horrible cold eyes Starring at me without mercy I choked and froze on a blazing summer’s day His filthy, iron hands grabbed me roughly without care Lowered and then nailed me to the surface with rage Carelessly stripped me of everything And broke loose the gates of hell When he forcefully gained access to my sacred place And started feeding his insatiable lust Enjoying every moment without quilt Going up and down on top of me like a yo-yo Groaning with pleasure while I was buried Inside the reeling room of shame, mourning Unashamed, unembarrassed he kept going, Drenched in stinking dismaying sweat Silently I kept crying within the confines of fears My hopes sunken hollow in a grave of self-pity Inevitably my world came to an abrupt halt My pride deprived My confidence stolen My dreams devoured And nothing will ever excavate them from The deepest deep that they’ve gone to No sentence will ever compensate me For the pain I suffered when my Innocence was stolen.
— Moloko D. Mahuma, Apr 13, 2010
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Critiques
Giuliana Isabella
16 years 2 months ago
Well,
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
Fight grrrl! He took nothing from you, he did things to you.
Moloko D. Mahuma
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks for caring Jess
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
that is really interesting beause I have criticised
Moloko D. Mahuma
16 years 2 months ago
Point taken Jess
Moloko D. Mahuma
16 years 2 months ago
Appreciated
Moloko D. Mahuma
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Well described Moloko
Moloko D. Mahuma
16 years 2 months ago
Salute
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