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Apr 13, 2010
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a true tale (perhaps)
==
a
true
tale
(perhaps)
under warm bright mid-
morn sun, a lone bumblebee
abuzz, flashing her
trademark yellow and
black, while she flies blocks my foot-
path for a very
few seconds at best;
I pause to wait for her unaimed
scanning to take her
elsewhere; then, to my
wide-eyed surprise, I notice
a wee sign staked at
my left in grassy
ground (the smallest of bold-red
balloons bobs and weaves
from one side to the
other at the end of its
teensy tether); the
sign's message in
formal print warns:
to whomever it
really might perhaps be
happily concerned:
bumblebee crossing ...
please wait for her to fly her-
self right on out of
here, wherever
said here may be
==
a
true
tale
(perhaps)
under warm bright mid-
morn sun, a lone bumblebee
abuzz, flashing her
trademark yellow and
black, while she flies blocks my foot-
path for a very
few seconds at best;
I pause to wait for her unaimed
scanning to take her
elsewhere; then, to my
wide-eyed surprise, I notice
a wee sign staked at
my left in grassy
ground (the smallest of bold-red
balloons bobs and weaves
from one side to the
other at the end of its
teensy tether); the
sign's message in
formal print warns:
to whomever it
really might perhaps be
happily concerned:
bumblebee crossing ...
please wait for her to fly her-
self right on out of
here, wherever
said here may be
==
— barbsdad2003, Apr 13, 2010
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Critiques
Clem
16 years 2 months ago
Fun story
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Wonderful Chuck
barbsdad2003
16 years 1 month ago
Don't know that ...
barbsdad2003
16 years 1 month ago
I do ...
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Chuck
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Chuck
barbsdad2003
16 years 1 month ago
Hey there!
weirdelf
16 years ago
Dear Chuck, you are an
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