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a true tale (perhaps)

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a
true
tale
(perhaps)


under warm bright mid-
morn sun, a lone bumblebee
abuzz, flashing her

trademark yellow and
black, while she flies blocks my foot-
path for a very

few seconds at best;
I pause to wait for her unaimed
scanning to take her

elsewhere; then, to my
wide-eyed surprise, I notice
a wee sign staked at

my left in grassy
ground (the smallest of bold-red
balloons bobs and weaves

from one side to the
other at the end of its
teensy tether); the

sign's message in 
formal print warns:

to whomever it
really might perhaps be
happily concerned:

bumblebee crossing ...
please wait for her to fly her-
self right on out of


here, wherever
said here may be


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— barbsdad2003, Apr 13, 2010

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Clem

16 years 2 months ago

Fun story

It is amazing that someone put out a sign but more amazing is the timing.
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Wonderful Chuck

I love the layout and descriptions. As much as the bumblebee is beautiful - from a distance, I'm terrified of bees, wasps and bluebottles. I think it's the buzzing noise. The wasp is my greatest fear. Brilliant write Chuck Rosina xena465
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barbsdad2003

16 years 1 month ago

Don't know that ...

confession's as good for my soul as many insist it is (or should be), but ... I do have a special affinity (liking) for bumblebees. Perhaps it's 'cause I'm sort of a bumbling bee myself from time to time. I taught one of my nieces (when she was approx. ten or so) how a wild bumblebee can be stroked/petted with the softest of index-finger touches. Best time, I think, it can be done's when the bee's very much preoccupied with nectar-gathering at a blossom. The bristles felt remind me always of those bristly fat little caterpillars that adopt a fetal position when bothered; and I love their particular orange-on-black/black-on-orange stripes that're as bold, really, as the colors of a bumblebee. Chuck
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barbsdad2003

16 years 1 month ago

I do ...

confess the sign's a fiction, the rest non. Thanx, Chuck
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Chuck

The bumblebee has just as much right to be here as the rest of us. I love the thought of a bumblebee crossing. Always, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Chuck

This is just joy off the page, Bubblebee crossing I am with Cat I love the thought love and hugs Jayne-Chloe (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

Dear Chuck, you are an

Dear Chuck, you are an inspiration to tenderness, mirth and poetry, As a direct consequence of this piece, though you should in no way be blamed or held accountable, I wrote a piece on bumblebee signage myself (possibly to be followed with a treatise on entomological semiology). "Bumblebees Can't Fly" http://www.neopoet.com/node/39994 Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]

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