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mantiscepter
Apr 13, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Mountain View

 Dark secrets
in the vastness
of their beauty

untold quests 
of time

held within
these winding
jagged sides

where a wall of
surrounding trees
rests Masterfully 

at these sides
touched ever so softly
in clouds which hover

in this radiant light
of morning Dew 
How Majestic.!!


— mantiscepter, Apr 13, 2010

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Pumpkin123s

16 years 2 months ago

hello

How Majestic indeed! Really liked your poem!!!.
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Majestic

thank you for reading this poem, I'm john glad to see you out here on this great site. and better yet you liked the poem, thats always a plus. A very nice way to meet someone... hope to see you around and maybe read some of your material. John thanx again.Pumkin123s. Mantiscepter.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

You know I love the image

Your poetry brings to my poetic mind when I need it the most. I really like this one and it flows just so well Another Kudos to you my friend Love,Mona xoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

words of heart.

Hi Mona, How have you been. thanx for stopping to catch up on your reading. seems you have a fondness for the beauty in life,whether it be music, singing, or poetic verse. this site, is filled with lovely people that gather as birds in streams of warm spring fields filled with a radiant calling, soft so soothing, we place our dreams for all to live or join. Love John. Mantiscepter
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

True so true

And now let me get back to what I do best as so yourself reminding us of beauty in life, music singing and the Arts. Love your writes my friend, for sure Good nite Love Magics02 aka Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

True

Thank you again Mona and My real name is John. and you are so right. Have a good night. Mantiscepter.

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