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My Angels Teardrops

My guardian angel,once careless and free
flew into the clouds and lost touch with me
Her tears were cold and wet,falling on my face
Her smile had left me without a trace,

Her angelic lips quivered,frozen and scared
I felt rain clouds visitin,and thought I was prepared
I knew that angels,often content
Were very special creatures that God had sent,

To see one sad,
so afraid,
so alone,
Had made me weep while the cold winds had blown,

Her wings lost feathers
comforting and soft
falling from the stars
floating aloft,

Her pain was felt through out the land
To feel true misery is impossable to stand
I pray so that when her pain stops,
I'll be able to forget my beloved angels teardrops.


            Dark Angel/Ash Knight/Poet_Laurete            (All names that I am known by)
— Dark.Poetress, Apr 13, 2010

Critiques

M

magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I like this write of yours Poet

I have not seen you around for awhile and I stumbled upon you again. How nice this is this poem of yours. Beloved angels teardrops, I like the title. will catch up with you once again on the next write. Love to you and yours Mona xoxox
Dark.Poetress

Dark.Poetress

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you

Thank you Mona,I have been ill at ease and very busy lately, I shall not abandon my poetry though,nor my fellow poets. Thanks once again,it is my favorite of my writes. Love to you and yours also, Lillie xoxox

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