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Apr 13, 2010
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My Angels Teardrops
My guardian angel,once careless and free
flew into the clouds and lost touch with me
Her tears were cold and wet,falling on my face
Her smile had left me without a trace,
Her angelic lips quivered,frozen and scared
I felt rain clouds visitin,and thought I was prepared
I knew that angels,often content
Were very special creatures that God had sent,
To see one sad,
so afraid,
so alone,
Had made me weep while the cold winds had blown,
Her wings lost feathers
comforting and soft
falling from the stars
floating aloft,
Her pain was felt through out the land
To feel true misery is impossable to stand
I pray so that when her pain stops,
I'll be able to forget my beloved angels teardrops.
Dark Angel/Ash Knight/Poet_Laurete (All names that I am known by)
flew into the clouds and lost touch with me
Her tears were cold and wet,falling on my face
Her smile had left me without a trace,
Her angelic lips quivered,frozen and scared
I felt rain clouds visitin,and thought I was prepared
I knew that angels,often content
Were very special creatures that God had sent,
To see one sad,
so afraid,
so alone,
Had made me weep while the cold winds had blown,
Her wings lost feathers
comforting and soft
falling from the stars
floating aloft,
Her pain was felt through out the land
To feel true misery is impossable to stand
I pray so that when her pain stops,
I'll be able to forget my beloved angels teardrops.
Dark Angel/Ash Knight/Poet_Laurete (All names that I am known by)
— Dark.Poetress, Apr 13, 2010
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magics02
16 years 2 months ago
I like this write of yours Poet
Dark.Poetress
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you
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