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barbsdad2003
Apr 17, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

two insteads

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two
insteads

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instead I

deep within my pen
resides the ghost of who I am,
who I am really,

the who that wishes
to come out, but, lacking in
courage sufficient

for such bold act, takes
instead its other choice, a
stance safely ... within

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instead II

I think you think my
bustling pen scribes for you; it
writes instead ... for me

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— barbsdad2003, Apr 17, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Well scribed with insight my

Well scribed with insight my dearest friend. ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Chuck

Anna is so right about your ability to clearly see into your own nature. Always, Cat
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 1 month ago

two

Chuck, I simply loved these, of truth, heart and soul! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Chuck

I am late to this party but I loved this one ... brilliant both are ;) love and hugs JayCee x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

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