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karen
Apr 18, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Asleep and Unaware


To sleep
is to be at peace
with Your mind closed
 reality is shut out
it is only your  dreams
  that you  will see
and  when you awake
do you come back into reality

— karen, Apr 18, 2010

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sleep is

....not sound unless its like death and then there is no question of dreams its all over do think it all over

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