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Apr 19, 2010
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where are you?
==
where
are
you?
---
From the shaken tower
A flock of bells take flight,
And go with the hour.
---Alice Meynell
---
okay, okay; time
for swallow friends to come back;
where have you gone? where?
I saw Great Blue on
this predawn morning's walk, but
nary a single
swallow;
I saw beaver so
busy at dawn---in ice-cold
waters, mind you!---at
woods' edge on the south
side of my backyard; but as
to happy, agile
fork-tails
at your normal haunts
under the roadway over-
pass? nary a one,
nary a one; have
you (somehow) forgotten me?
have I done something
in need of
forgiveness?
==
— barbsdad2003, Apr 19, 2010
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loved
16 years 1 month ago
Marvelllous
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
I love this one too.
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
A good sincere heartfelt
whitetea
16 years 1 month ago
Chuck!!!!!!
manawa
16 years 1 month ago
I expect swallows
barbsdad2003
16 years 1 month ago
Thanx
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