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The Wild Man at His End

The Wild Man at His End

 

“Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,

And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,

Do not go gentle into that good night.”

Dylan Thomas

 

The wild man pulls the sun around its course

This old world is the oyster of his will

He rides his Harley like a bucking horse

 

At breaking bad there is no better resource

Spends his money at the local meth mill.  

The wild man pulls the sun around its course

 

Old Lady at his back he is the source

Flaming down Main Street, becomes a fire drill

He rides his Harley like a bucking horse

 

Five times for him the male half of divorce

He knows the heat of passion and the chill

The wild man pulls the sun around its course

 

Ignoring promises, a tour de force

Others bear the grief while he mounts the thrill

He rides his Harley like a bucking horse

 

But Dylan, late at night he feels remorse

He will not willingly climb death’s dark hill

The wild man pulls the sun around its course

He rides his Harley like a bucking horse

 


— Clem, Apr 21, 2010

Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Thrilling write

I've never ridden a motor bike. I was asked once, when I was younger, if I wanted to ride on the back of a Harley, but declined. I liked him, but was afraid to share his thrill for motor bikes. Don't tell anyone, but I loved his leather gear...however, we didn't last very long together. Well written CleM. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Clem

had my bike licence since I was 17 ... I loved your poem I see nothing to crit love JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

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