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The Wild Man at His End
The Wild Man at His End
“Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.”
Dylan Thomas
The wild man pulls the sun around its course
This old world is the oyster of his will
He rides his Harley like a bucking horse
At breaking bad there is no better resource
Spends his money at the local meth mill.
The wild man pulls the sun around its course
Old Lady at his back he is the source
Flaming down Main Street, becomes a fire drill
He rides his Harley like a bucking horse
Five times for him the male half of divorce
He knows the heat of passion and the chill
The wild man pulls the sun around its course
Ignoring promises, a tour de force
Others bear the grief while he mounts the thrill
He rides his Harley like a bucking horse
But Dylan, late at night he feels remorse
He will not willingly climb death’s dark hill
The wild man pulls the sun around its course
He rides his Harley like a bucking horse
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xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Thrilling write
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Clem
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