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Charles Manson rides again

Charles Manson “rides again” for all who dont know who charles manson is(all though i highly doubt there are many) charles manson is a man born in 1969,and a would be music director,but IS a mass murderer who nearly started a race war in his day of “flower power”.charles manson is currently in a rehibilitation facility in california,and is currently 74 years of age,[not counting this year].Although I disagree with many things this is a very interesting case,but what i will say is that charles manson should have died long ago.But apparently that wont happen [and we wonder why the state of california is messed up] well so far this my info on the subject,please correct me on my errors if you wish,or add your own info or comment on this subject.

 

Lillie Thrasher.

 

“justice is one thing,sympahy for the guilty is another”

— Dark.Poetress, Apr 23, 2010

Critiques

Beauregard

Beauregard

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Poet,

are you trying to write a poem about Charles Manson, or write a blog post about him? Kelsey
Dark.Poetress

Dark.Poetress

16 years 1 month ago

not a poem,i couldnt write a

not a poem,i couldnt write a poem on him and probly woulnt waist the time. its just something to be put together i guess.i just really dont like this guy. Ash
Dark.Poetress

Dark.Poetress

16 years 1 month ago

"rides again" point that

1. I am only 13 so what u say about bein around then is so kool! 2. He should NOT still be alive. 3. The fact that he is just doesn't seem right 4. I am trying to figure out how others might feel on the subject. -Ash
Dark.Poetress

Dark.Poetress

16 years 1 month ago

No problem Indi

lol being old can't be so bad actually it only means you know more and have seen what some can only dream of. He may be,but if you think about it,in some ways he is even worse.He killed many and tried to start a war,all because he was some damn racist! (pardon my french please) He may be there but that doesn't mean he'll be made to stay there and in that case,all would be better with him gone. While I may agree with you on the issue of personal opinion I am mostly considering that,in a way,he is about as bad as an anti-Christ could even ever be.I also realize that I am speaking of a worst case sinerio,but I have had alot of those so it is difficult not to concider them. Well...you have me there,...partially. You see my point is that if they gave him a ceiling nice and low with lower beams,a belt or rope,he would probably take the offer.He killed so many that keeping him in jail isn't helping anyway.The goverment are definatly skipping around the edge's of everbody with a minds morals.If they kill the killers..then how are they any diiferent from what they claim too hate?People every where should think about this. Thanks for the advice,but I'll have too pass.I haven't been a kid for more than 6 years.I can't go back now,It's too late.Your right,youth dosen't last,but...I prefer the way I am.Atleast this way I can be like the old fogey's I admire and look up to so much. I'll give Manson this Indi,he sure as hell has guts,stupidity too though so...,well either way,guts.There it is,plain and simple.You can live in this world and have guts too kill.Or,like many others,have the guts to stop murder and stuff as such.It is all about guts.Guts...and,more importantly, HEART. ___---Ash
Dark.Poetress

Dark.Poetress

16 years 1 month ago

I am gratified

Thank you,well I don't know what else you'll glean but hopefully it will be good. always do love it when people leave their comments,good or bad,Ash.
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 1 month ago

Poet_Laurete...

This is an interesting subject to say the least, has been for years. Your facts are not right, Manson was born in 1934. He didn't almost start a race war, it was his intention though. To date, he has been in solitary confinement for longer than any prisoner in American history, not that I have sympathy for him, he is where he belongs and even he knows it. Your other subject here is one of capitol punishment which is left to each state to decide on, which is also how it should be. Richard

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