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WEDDING PRESENT


Eyes lowered at top -table
sitting- forever the 'Black Sheep'
wanting to heckle
cut through the charade
wedding breakfast

Am I the only one, yet again,
who has to expose the
truth in this
'family'?

"Are you serious?
all the plattitudes, letters,
presents, cash...give you
a head start in the
monogamous
marriage
con-
you've already got 
the kid
the house
the ring

Why make promises that you won't keep?

I want my redundant donation
back!
(it was on sale
or return)

Bit like this pantomime we're
enduring
for the sake of making that
sweet bastard
you spawned
-acceptable"
— panaella, Apr 27, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

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panaella

16 years 1 month ago

not even a decent punch up!

As you know went to the family wedding last week...just sat through it...being cynical thinking..."this won't last...they'll be divorced within 5 years"...am I just a jaded girlie? Your Mrs! (ironic!!!!..lol) xxx
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Ells

You go girl ... I fucking loved this one ... sorry to be late lovely, been under the weather .... applause :) love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:- Death is the great adventure beside which moon landings and space trips pale into insignificance. Addison Joseph")
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panaella

16 years 1 month ago

poor you

awww JC...hope you're feeling better. I went to a family wedding last week...all the lovey-dovey stuff left me cold...getting too jaded by all this matrimony malarky!...maybe i'm just wistful!...lol
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ngaioBeck

16 years 1 month ago

Wedding Present

Wow! You're singing from my hymnbook. I've thought about getting married just to get even. Why is it if a person is priveleged whatever one gives is never enough. Another thing,I I have friends/and or relatives who have done the thing three or four times.

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