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Apr 27, 2010
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WEDDING PRESENT
Eyes lowered at top -table
sitting- forever the 'Black Sheep'
wanting to heckle
cut through the charade
wedding breakfast
Am I the only one, yet again,
who has to expose the
truth in this
'family'?
"Are you serious?
all the plattitudes, letters,
presents, cash...give you
a head start in the
monogamous
marriage
con-
you've already got
the kid
the house
the ring
Why make promises that you won't keep?
I want my redundant donation
back!
(it was on sale
or return)
Bit like this pantomime we're
enduring
for the sake of making that
sweet bastard
you spawned
-acceptable"
— panaella, Apr 27, 2010
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panaella
16 years 1 month ago
not even a decent punch up!
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Ells
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
poor you
ngaioBeck
16 years 1 month ago
Wedding Present
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