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May 01, 2010
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sorry
==
sorry
--
for the discerning
reader of poetry,
like the tongue taken
by fine tea,
the mind's eye savors
a delicacy
---barbsdad
--
I'm so sorry I
ruined the tea by adding
too much ginger; I'm
not so sorry I
did not drink it; I really
must confess it is,
like so many things,
a tricky business, the just-
right spicing of tea---
--
at least for me,
evidently
==
— barbsdad2003, May 01, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
as the story goes i think
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Chuck
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Ann of Norway“for the
barbsdad2003
16 years 1 month ago
Oh, boy!
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
I like it
IKnowNoBox
16 years 1 month ago
I prefer chai.
Janice Pearce
16 years 1 month ago
sorry
barbsdad2003
16 years 1 month ago
Laughing ...
loved
16 years 1 month ago
what an honour twas
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Chuck
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Vhuck I sent my mother some birch leaf tea
barbsdad2003
16 years 1 month ago
birch ...
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Every morning we take Sencha
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