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Pea Pod Love


Pea Pod Love

They are two peas in a pod.Both are wrinkled and shriveled,Rejects by the Green Giantand the beautiful people.Their genes are not right,Their nurture was a fright,
But their marriage a delight.
They love each other with their scars
With care he never cuts her there
And she don't kick him in his genes.
— Clem, May 01, 2010

Critiques

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barbsdad2003

16 years 1 month ago

Uh-oh

A dangerous amount of fun you're havin' here! Brought me a smile (or two). Respectfully, Chuck
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Clem

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

Thanks for the response. I was thinking no one was going to catch on to this one.

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