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May 06, 2010
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I Left My Tumour At St Vincent's (as if your singing "I left my heart in San Francisco)
She went
SPLAT!!!
when she
landed on
the ground
below
held her
tight by
the ankles
from the
7th floor
of St Vincent's
spent three
days in
ICU
enjoyed the
attention from
all the
nurses
after my
first meal
gave me
a lasting
gift of
bugle bum
Post Surgery: Dr Parkinson came to see me and told me she was all but left, I asked what colour she was...He said a yellowish grey and quite rubbery and easy to remove...But you can't blow your nose for at least 6 weeks...then he left with a smile from ear to ear...
goodbye my
lovely Britney
for you
haven given
me
so much
pain
and I
delight in
your demise
on the
pavement at
St Vincent's
SPLAT!!!
when she
landed on
the ground
below
held her
tight by
the ankles
from the
7th floor
of St Vincent's
spent three
days in
ICU
enjoyed the
attention from
all the
nurses
after my
first meal
gave me
a lasting
gift of
bugle bum
Post Surgery: Dr Parkinson came to see me and told me she was all but left, I asked what colour she was...He said a yellowish grey and quite rubbery and easy to remove...But you can't blow your nose for at least 6 weeks...then he left with a smile from ear to ear...
goodbye my
lovely Britney
for you
haven given
me
so much
pain
and I
delight in
your demise
on the
pavement at
St Vincent's
— Fleur MacDonald, May 06, 2010
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magics02
16 years 1 month ago
You're back!!!!
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 1 month ago
thank you Mona
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Soooooooooo glad to see and
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
I tried to click on your utube
Alice Ember
16 years 1 month ago
I'm glad
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dearest Friend
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 1 month ago
hi baby
weirdelf
16 years 1 month ago
You're a true aussie battler, and a fine poet.
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 1 month ago
most
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
wonderful to meet you!
Beauregard
16 years 1 month ago
Welcome Back Fleur
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
You've one brave lady
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 1 month ago
thank you
lyz
16 years 1 month ago
Only you!
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