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in the heat
==
--
There is a Reaper whose
name is Death,
And with his sickle keen,
He reaps the bearded grain
at a breath,
And the flowers that grow
between
---Longfellow
--
in
the
heat
and sweat, the labor,
the misery forced on me by
high-country Colorado
summer's
afternoon sun, I
yank one more bale from ground to
brink of truck bed, its
green
timothy fragrant
to the nose were I of a
proper mind to notice;
however,
I do make out,
albeit in the brief flyby
of bale from earth to
creeping
truck, the mangled corpse,
the freshly broken/splintered
bones, the blood-caked fur
of
a simple mouse crushed,
caught by machinery made
for packaging fallen
hay
from their rows downfield,
and not, it would seem to me,
made for baling mice
==
Critiques
Marie-I-Be
16 years 1 month ago
subtleties of brilliance
barbsdad2003
16 years 1 month ago
Wow!
Marie-I-Be
16 years 1 month ago
Chuck
barbsdad2003
16 years ago
Can't help ...
Marie-I-Be
16 years ago
Brave Boy
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