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Seemingly so very true

 

Seemingly  So Very True

I write for you all

Those who love to read

And

Make me a friend after it…

Thanks to all

Who make my day

And poetry I shall continue

To compose  today

 

Love is in my hearts for all

I shall some day be

A veritable part after all

Loved once is my poetic name

All love me that’s what

The loveliest game

— loved, May 11, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

LOved i love you!

But your really wierd! Weird weeerd very unique! shirley harrison
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

Weird as weird can be

My reply is the same as is for Rosi......... the same as is for everyone i thank thee i thank thee i thank thee
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

Reply Is

...the same as is for everyone i thank thee i thank thee i thank thee
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Me lov u 2 Loved

Five stars for a nice write to us Loved. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

One day

... some day u will make a star out of me and in the heavens i shall all day and nite long will be winking at thee thanks for the love u give friends of Neopoets to me...........
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

loved, this is a wonderful site, as you know

but it has a trap, writng your poems for Neopoet takes away from their universality. Think about this, it is important. Write for everyone, not just us, Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

oh no! not stop writing!

I, and others, have found that when we spend a lot of time on Neopoet we found ourselves writing for Neopoet. I was merely suggesting this is a problem others have found. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]

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