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The girls are glamorous

The girls are glamorous

I wonder if a few dollars will do

The girls are glamorous

I wonder if love alone will do



The girls are glamorous

Flashy wears, marching colors

Whimsical and capricious

Africa, Adehye and Volta hallers



The girls are glamorous

Model-like catwalks all over the runways

The girls are glamorous

Its Bonjour pizza strictly on tuesdays



The girls are glamorous

I need me one stuck on my wall

Their wants so copious

Just wish they all lived together in a mall



The girls are glamorous

My few pennies may not be enough

Cars must be luxurious

Its not ok to just own a golf



The girls are glamorous

The girls are flashy, sweetly nasty

Madly got us craving

Damn!! The girls are crazy tasty
— Ostra, May 11, 2010

Critiques

artygirl87

artygirl87

16 years ago

Didn’t get the pizza

Didn't get the pizza bit...but rest was great. Its a shame they say superficial beautiful people are nasty...but you're spot on with us wanting to be like them or have one (in your case).
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Ostra

15 years 11 months ago

The pizza?

In ghana, a food company named bonjour gives one pizza free for any one you buy on tuesdays. Thanks for reading and liking it..

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