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May 12, 2010
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Besides the River
I walk besides the stream
They call it the river
Of no return.
I walk aimlessly
As the waters leave me
Far behind
As they merge with eternity
And
Seek of me
To bide my time…
Slowly, but with a stable gait
I continue my walk
Silently all alone
As the water down
Thames has flown
Then
When I reach the horizon
My walk ceases
Any motion,
As I await
To be pushed and submerged
In the vast ocean…
— loved, May 12, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Mmmmmmm. Loved, you have
loved
16 years 1 month ago
Marvellous Comment
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Sooner or later we all
loved
16 years 1 month ago
beautiful comments
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Very nice Loved
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
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judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
i agree with all the above
loved
16 years 1 month ago
the TRIO above trio
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