Wafi

May 13, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Beauty Of Loneliness

What is more beautiful
Than my loneliness?
When, in the late hour
Of my lonely night,
You come to me...
Hold my hand
And take me
To the valleys far off
Away from this selfish world of lust...
Where there is none
But you and me...
Melting like ice
In the sunlight of love
To flow
Into the sea of eternity!

— Wafi, May 13, 2010

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Into the images of love, I

Into the images of love, I turn, oh, sea! return me to the depth of myself, let me see my how you shine! I love your poetry, Wafi! You honour your favourite poets. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

Wafi

16 years ago

Thank You Ana

Thank you Ana,for your great comments. Always thrilled to see you on my page :) I appreciate your sweet thoughts. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

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hi this interests me indeed " when in the late hour of my lonely night you come to me " can you tell me your thoughts behind them lines , i only ask as i like this write cheers ,,,,zigs

ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi

hi this interests me indeed " when in the late hour of my lonely night you come to me " can you tell me your thoughts behind them lines , i only ask as i like this write cheers ,,,,zigs

Wafi

16 years ago

Thank You Zigs

Thank you Zigs, for taking the time to read and comment. Just some lovely thoughs of my imagination :) Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

loved

16 years 1 month ago

lovely Wafi poet ....some day u will be remembered like GHALIB,

BAHADUR SHAH ZAFAR. SHAUK OR ZAULK ??? WHICH I CAN'T recollect just now AND KAIFI AZMI OF INDIA i would perhaps make it ur poem... the sunshine of ... in to everlasting horizons of a never ending timeless and endless eternity u may write afresh a new one perhaps without changing the originality of this creation of urs.

Wafi

16 years ago

Oh Great Poets

Oh great poets they are, dear Loved. Thanks for your great words about me. I am honored :) Your version of it beautiful too. I like it. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

loved

16 years ago

ur replies r

..awaited please do apply ur mind and reply thanks sonny boy

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Just exquisite here Wafi

No stars can shine bright enough to show you how I love this poem of yours. Just amazing. Magnifico my friend Mona xoxoo TIME well spent is TIME well lived

Wafi

16 years ago

Thank You Mona

Thank you Mona, my loving friend, for taking the time to read and comment. Love your beautiful smiling face. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

seabhac

16 years 1 month ago

The poem supprised me with the title

I came into the poem expecting aloneness but there was just a glimpse and then 'she ' took you away from being alone, It made me feel cheated like you were never really alone. As a poem the rhythm is excellent and the language lovely but why did it make me feel this way about it...maybe cheated from my own lonlyness maybe jealious of yours having someone to take your hand and lead you away. Wow where did that response come from!!!!! Seabhac

Wafi

16 years ago

Hi Seabhac

Hi Seabhac, great to hear from you. Long time havent read your work. Must go and check. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. So glad it grabbed your attention. I like your thoughts about it. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Poetry at its finest!

wow this is a wonderful poem i think sometimes the best company to be in is our own! I love it! shirley harrison

Wafi

16 years ago

Oh Thanks A Lot

Oh thanks a lot for such a positive comment, Shirley. Yeah that is the beauty of loneliness. I appreaciate your thoughts a lot. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

very beautiful write wafi

'You come to me… Hold my hand And take me To the valleys far off Away from this selfish world of lust…' i get the impression that this is someone in spirit if i'm wrong i'm sorry, but i like the read as i see it love judy xx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

Wafi

16 years ago

Thanks A Lot Judy

Thanks a lot Judy, for taking the time to read and comment. So glad to see you. You got it correctly. I appreciate your thoughts. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

Seren

16 years ago

My Dear friend

Your poem took me by the hand and lead me through it ... sigh sigh sigh sigh sigh Wafi I am so sorry to have missed the posting of this one ... but its ... beautiful ... thanks for sharing hun nominated love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Wafi

16 years ago

Thaks A Lot Jayne

Thanks a lot dear Jayne, my loving and generous friend. Always glad to see you. I appreciate your great thoughts. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

Wafi

16 years ago