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May 14, 2010
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time to fight
You tell me not to scream,
you said if i do you will cause more pain.
im still,
i want to fight back,
my mind races.
you tell me not to move.
the pain rushes through my body,
as if i was bitten by a rattle snake.
i cant take it.
you hurt me once before.
it is time to fight back.
you said if i do you will cause more pain.
im still,
i want to fight back,
my mind races.
you tell me not to move.
the pain rushes through my body,
as if i was bitten by a rattle snake.
i cant take it.
you hurt me once before.
it is time to fight back.
— Sinthya, May 14, 2010
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hobo
16 years 1 month ago
my friend
Alice Ember
16 years 1 month ago
Nice write
arja
16 years ago
..oh, that hurts.. nice
weirdelf
16 years ago
go grrrl!
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