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No age-restricted Movie

There are parents who shelter their children from the cruelties of this world. No horror movies or age-restricted 16, No smoking nor swearing, No finance discussions or political debates. Cocooned in a family-nest, kept safe, protected. Innocence shielded. Yet, you pulled me out and shoved me into the real world... Where children die of hunger and girls get raped on the street corner. Where boogey men are not just monsters who jump out of closets but reality. Where girlfriends slap me across the face and beer bottles get thrown at us. Where policemen come knocking at our door, dragging me away screaming. Where prostitutes fall out of balconies and drug lords become our next-door-neighbours. Where 16 year olds sell their souls and hypocrytic pastors turn a blind eye to the imperfect. This is no age restricted movie. This is real. Why did you not make me leave the room? Too much responsibility. Grown up too soon. Why did you not shelter me? Cover my eyes? It was bad but it was good. I am strong, streetwise, sturdy, steadfast and hardwearing. I can handle anything, relate to anything. Still. I wish you hadn't. I just wanted to be a child. Sheltered. Safe. Oblivious.
— Kassie, May 15, 2010

Critiques

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billy bilo

16 years ago

I just wanted to be a child

but now and forever your glad your parents did what they did? good poem, first poem you wrote then excellent poem. The funky boogie-woogie man isnt as scary as the bogey man tho.
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xena465

16 years ago

Brilliant Kassie

I love the strong feelings that came through in all that you wrote and I love how you ended it with the last few lines...well done. Rosina xena465
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

Kassie 10 stars!

This is a superb piece of poetry, my best friend is from South Africa, and i know its one of the most beautiful countries in the world, unfortunately its so full of crime, i my self have heard many very shocking stories and you have really shown many of them in this poem! I hope you are strong its great to be a child unknowing of the terrible things however its better to live with eyes that are open! Protecting you is showing you that its not just cotton wool in the real world! Wonderful poem Much love i will come to read more of your poetry! shirley harrison

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