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Sinthya
Sinthya
May 16, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

What you say

you say i am beautiful,
but never take me out.
You say I love you,
but what is love.
happiness,
pain,
heartbreak.
the way i feel never matters.
But you still repeat,
your beautiful,I love you.
— Sinthya, May 16, 2010

About the Author

Country/Region: New York

Favorite Poets: I cant really say i have a favorite!

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years ago

You okay honey?

Are you okay hon? Lovely write it has pain and very strong emotions. I'll check with you at school tomorrow. Stay safe love yah Alice Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
Sinthya

Sinthya

16 years ago

Thanks

thank you. may feelings dont come out when i say them so when i write things they show.
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years ago

Doesn’t much sound like

Doesn't much sound like real love, of coarse that is for you to feel out. I just hope you don't let him keep causing pain with out seeing the damage that can be done. Good write. Julie D.D.
lou

lou

16 years ago

I Know

Hi I know the feeling Lou
Sinthya

Sinthya

16 years ago

Thanks

thanks for the like. i will right more
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

Good write

The star is rising and it has your face on it. I will comment on your works as I read them. Well done and best wishes. T.
Mark

Mark

16 years ago

And then..

And then love once again :) Don't believe what is said about only having love once (it's just different the next time) A bit of a gripe a bit of a sweet write, Sinthya.. Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..

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