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A shot of Jose for the road
Empty drum this hearts rhythm
Beats disoriented
It stumbles with vision blurred
Self-destructively drunk
Looking for some kind of relief
Anything numbing or escaping
A way out it beats for
A way in, it cannot see
Bi-lingual, it’s language, for only you, it speaks
My hearts rhythm a bit off key
The pitch is all wrong
Take a listen
The stink of tequila
Reeks off it’s tongue
Evidence of sins from the night before
With eyes out of focus
My chests instrument
Is not fit to make decisions
This hearts music is terrible
A failed record, no albums sold
It sits dusty, untouched on the shelf
Bum Bum beats the heart
Bum Bum Bum tries again
Bum Bum one more time beat beat beat
This heart music of mine
It tries to resemble a rhythm
But it keeps falling short of the beat
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Ravenshakti
16 years ago
A little Cuervo for me too...
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