I wanna' get away

             I wanna' get away,
             But I dont know how,
             My feelings feed on my soul,
             I have to get away right now,
            I have to find a way
            To get back in control
            I want to die,
            Right now this minute
            I can't stand one more exasperated sigh
          No one thinks I mean it,
           I can see it in they're eyes,
          They never understood,
          Just wait and hear they're agonized cries,
          They dont think I could,
          I can and would,
         But the idea scares me,
          I don't think I'll ever be free.

                    -Ash Knight

— Dark.Poetress, May 27, 2010

Critiques

ifoundaplace

16 years ago

ohh wow

This is so sadd... I hope you are alright. I want you to know, that it's okay to feel this way sometimes. We are all gonna want to get away and die by times, but we realize one day that we are loved and cared for here on earth and that we want to live. Whatever it is that is hurting you and putting you through these terrible thoughts, I pray that you make it alright and that you realize how much you are loved. Whatever it is, it will get better. just look past the hurt and pain and see to the other side. See the brighter side of things. You'll be alright.. Seems neopoet has been quite depressing today.. we all have our days Good job Danielle (:

Dark.Poetress

16 years ago

thanks, yeah im good, just

thanks, yeah im good, just depressed latly, i seem to not be able to get anything done that i need too and it is because of the depression.. Ash ='

BrightEyed

16 years ago

so sad

so sad and so full of desperation tho quite beautiful none the less. Cant wait to read more. your friend, bright eyed

Dark.Poetress

16 years ago

thanks brighteyed, i will

thanks brighteyed, i will have more work out as soon as possable, for a little while though I will be posting parts of my book on the short stories, could use some feed on my writing, can you look over it some?

Dark.Poetress

16 years ago

I will be trying that when I

I will be trying that when I can get away and find some small form of solitude, but that will be years. Thank you, ='

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