I Cry

I sit here and I cry
for all the things
that screwed up my mind

I cry
for all the people
I hurt with my lies

I cry
for the all the friend
that I lost

I cry
for all the times
that I couldn’t before

I cry
for all the pain
I kept inside

I cry
for all the scars
that mark my arms

I cry
for all the scars
on my sisters arms

I cry
because I can
because it helps

I cry
but its not enough
it can never be enough

I cry

— Silent_Rain, Jun 06, 2010

Critiques

ifoundaplace

16 years ago

awwh Rain

This is really good but very sad hon. You may cry as much as you need to, but I really wish you didn't have to. I'm here for you Danielle

Silent_Rain

16 years ago

:)

Thanks for the comment Dani!! I really appreseatw your commets!! ~Rain~ There's always a rainbow after the rain...

magics02

16 years ago

Rain

ANother sad piece but very well put. After I read it I said I am going to Rain's house pick her up and have her come stay here with me for a weekend. You won't have any time to think about crying, there would be too much fun at my house, I hope that dosen't offend you. You know I mean well by you for sure. Listen up being a teen these days just ain't easy so you cry if you want to. Summer is here and go out and have a blast, I wish I could come over and we could go to the the mermaid show at weeki wachee I always love the springs there and it is always so nice and cool the water on these hot days. Let me know if you come to town and maybe we can get together. Missed you in chat and smile baby girl:) Mona loves ya xoxoxox Rain just so you know after I read YOUR POEM here last night prompted me to write the poem If I Could. that one with you in mind, thought I would let you know rain shower, pretty flower. xoxoxo

Silent_Rain

16 years ago

:)

Thanks Mona!! I will go and cheak out that poem now!!! ~Rain~ There's always arainbow after the rain...

Silent_Rain

16 years ago

:)

Thanks Indi!!! See you in Chat!! ~Rain~ There's always a rainbow after the rain...

shirley harrison

16 years ago

i am sending you a hug!

lovely peice of poetry, sometimes i just have to cry as a rainbow is never far behind! shirley harrison

Silent_Rain

16 years ago

:)

Thanks! ~Rain~

Alice Ember

16 years ago

Again rain this was greta

I loved it. I try very hard not to cry. But, when you hold it back tolong the simplest thing can shatter you. Then the flood gates open and all hell breaks loss. your writing is awsome girl but, I want to hear a smile in your poems. I hope soon you'll have something happy to write 'bout. Hold tight girl and keep up the good work Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to

Silent_Rain

16 years ago