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barbsdad2003
Jun 07, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

though this

==

[n]ow and then a blinde
[pen] may hit a crow
                                      ---Armin

though
this

old
pen is not blessed
with eyes that see, she crosses
flat white paper
minding

her
scribbled way as
though she very much could

==
— barbsdad2003, Jun 07, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

Yes. And what a pen she

Yes. And what a pen she is! ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
Mark

Mark

16 years ago

20/20

that pen! this must be freewrite .. Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

Penultimate absurdities,

Ann of Norway Penultimate absurdities, and yet what magic codes you trace here from whence we know not! Swat and blotch and scribble, swivel, round and face the back of the blank sheet of your mind. Ann with love.

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