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I Will Miss You.

I am so tried.
But I can't sleep.
Because you are in my mind.

So when the stars lean down to kiss you.
Don't forget about me.
Don't forget that I am here.

I will dose off safe and soundly.
But I will miss your arms around me.
I will miss your soft lips on mine.
I will miss you.

I will miss everything we used to do.
I think that I might.
Even love you.



— broken_skye, Jun 08, 2010

Critiques

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Silent_Rain

16 years ago

:)

THIS IS SOOO CUTE!!!! ~Rain~
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scribbler

16 years ago

miss you

Ain't love great? lovely short write.......scribbler

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