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Jun 11, 2010
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Diminutive World
It’s a big world, our orb
so many countries and cities within
We travel to have heat, cold; pleasure
escape the silence or din.
When I travel, it’s so distant
further than I want to be
My definition of abroad
is going to Saltcoats by the sea.
I’ve never travelled on a big ship
my brothers fly to Spain
When I make a great journey
I go to England by train.
I’ve never flown on a plane
don’t even have a passport
I journey all the way from Scotland
to good ole Blackpool resort.
The thing is, the world I live in
is too big for someone like me
I may appear to be a simpleton
but I’m far from that, you see.
Some of us are meant for bigger things
to learn, teach or travel the planet
My world is big enough
to build it, takes a minuscule of granite.
— xena465, Jun 11, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years ago
“The journey of a thousand
xena465
16 years ago
Yes Anna
sunscreen
16 years ago
Great write mom, hopefully
xena465
16 years ago
Thanks Alex
sunscreen
16 years ago
You better be there in body
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Teh he,
judyanne
16 years ago
love it rosina
xena465
16 years ago
Thank you Judy
scribbler
16 years ago
world
xena465
16 years ago
Hey Handsome…
Seren
16 years ago
I love being at home but I
xena465
16 years ago
Awe JayCee...
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Home sweet Home!
xena465
16 years ago
Yeh I know why?
shirley harrison
16 years ago
well spotted
xena465
16 years ago
And good luck England
mand
16 years ago
Great poem Xena, well
xena465
16 years ago
Thank you so much Mand
shirley harrison
16 years ago
wrong attitude!
xena465
16 years ago
Oh Dear!!!
anonymous1
16 years ago
my sentiments exactly.
xena465
16 years ago
Thanks Lisa
magics02
16 years ago
Xena my lady friend
xena465
16 years ago
Thanks Mona
rogerramjet365
16 years ago
Hi
xena465
16 years ago
Thank you Rog
lou
16 years ago
Satisfaction
xena465
16 years ago
So true Lou
DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
I like your story, and very
xena465
16 years ago
Thanks Julie
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
In reading this delightfully
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Wow a big step!
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