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Do They I Wonder

Do children have ice cream flavored dreams
or do they just smile that sweet when they sleep so serene
or is a child's observation in an early time of life
encouragement of future and not of ending strife? 
— mantiscepter, Jun 11, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Hello Again

A thought provoking poem with heart. I have no suggestions to add. Always, Cat
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mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Children

Thank you for stopping to read and comment on this poem, I was happy to hear you liked it. hope to hear from you again John Mantiscepter
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mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Children

The future of our world, and such a joy also. Hi Mona glad you stopped by to say hi, it's been awhile.... I've missed you.. hope all is well. and will see you soon. Love John.

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