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mantiscepter
Jun 12, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

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I remember when
I was young and gay
the world was a playground 
now the time is near
for thought and preparation
as we must leave 
and start a new.
— mantiscepter, Jun 12, 2010

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Country/Region: USA

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Superb John

If only we could stay in the playground forever, but we grow up and life is serious and we have to deal with so much. Xena
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Life

Thanks Xena for your comments, I've been so busy lately with yard work and things, I have not had much time to myself, it's about 6:30 A.M. now and kinda nice ,quiet except for the occasional siren in the distance, and the clock ticking on the wall. so stay warm and write me again, I will see what I can accomplish this morning. se ya later wife-y. love John.
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Huh, typical husband...

Always too busy for your wife that, cooks, cleans and takes care of you. Be careful, I may divorce you John! Just `kidden`, you’re my overseas hubby and I forgive you. A wee hug and a kiss from bonny Scotland. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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mantiscepter

15 years 12 months ago

Humble

I'm Your humble servant here in the states and glad to be here. would like to visit some time? oh well. some day may come till then I'll see you out here. have fun Love John.

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