Legacy

Beautiful...just beautiful. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

You catch more flies with honey than you do vinegar!. This is a beauty. Subtle. Gentle rhyming pattern too... I really like it.

theme, wonderful wording. As to I place inside this box These things, I'd be tempted to place a colon after things, and/or perhaps leave a line space between things and the first line of the rest of the poem. I think that'd help separate the perceived intro, that does not rhyme, from the rest, which does. As to humming birds and honey bees, the American(don't know about overseas) spellings would be hummingbirds and honeybees. Regards and thanx, Chuck PS: Another, rather small, item: You've no space after each of the two commas. I do think it'd look better---and be more technically right---to include the appropriate spaces.

Nice to meet you. Your poem is composed of a great idea. But I think it could do without this line: Blue bruises,unkind words and remember that there should be a space between the comma and the next word. My favorite lines: Warm tender hands To hold your fears To help you through the future years. Always, Cat