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Shunning Ignorance Eeerie

 

Between You and me now no divide

With pride not but bow and rhyme

Yearning simply to see You as my Guide.

A sibling on the verge of fledging

Being transfixed out of uncertainty

A heart that beats with the torrent of cries

With a charisma of tears inundating dry eyes

Away from fear

Without a thought for tear and wear

Shunning ignorance eerie

Of the tower ivory

— ishaq, Jun 20, 2010

Critiques

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U K Atiyodi

15 years 11 months ago

‘Shunning ignorance

'Shunning ignorance eerie' is philosophical. Between you and I no divide--Thatvamasy. (Hindu Adwaita) To see you as my guide--to see the Almighty as guide.

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