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Release Me

Release Me

Release i scream,
bleed me dry.
This day i beg the demons
try, try,
for this soul will defy you.
Rage, rage,
this day a simple man,
stands before you and your unforgiving plague.
This day one soul in anger wages a war
a war that in heart shall be rememberd,
remembered evermore.

Release me
release your hold.
Believe me
believe in the will ive told.

Release i scream,
i rage this day.
Try.
Demon believe,
this day in pure soul a simple man
in heart shall free.
This day your fate shall not
will not in truth hang me.
In sadness this day i know you,
i know you to release me.
 

— reepa, Jun 23, 2010

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Region, Country: Eastern cape, South Africa, ZAF

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Hi Reepa

Strong great write. That's one hell of a fight. I hope you won. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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reepa

15 years 11 months ago

we always win

Thank you, we all have to fight some sort of demons at one stage or another. Thanks for your comment. Reepa

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