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Hearts

They hit me where my heart should be love,
And i was thinking,
Maybe,
Just maybe,
Since you have all of mine,
Could I have a peice,
Of your heart?

— TimeIsNotAPromise, Jun 23, 2010

Critiques

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

15 years 11 months ago

Simple,

but effective, the more i read it the more i like it.Regards Roscoe..

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