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An Emotional Tea Party

 

 

In the hypothalamus is where the body translates emotion

It is there my feelings hold their tea parties

Loneliness win’s best dressed, and bell of the ball

While love and satisfaction sit dateless and unnoticed in the corner

Anger and Anxiety fight for the first dance with Pride

But she sits on the bench, an injured athlete, unable to participate

— stavroula, Jun 24, 2010

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Mark

Mark

15 years 11 months ago

Poor pride..

maybe Class will come by and fix her up to dance :) not a rhyme for Sad :( but that's ok the rhythm holds this party up :) much enjoyed ::smiles:: Thanks, Mark people who hate attract people who hate and in the end they all end up hating each other

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