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raskin
Jun 29, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Out of the dim, a light

High tide left you here barren, covered with debris a poor huddled mass reaching to touch your shadow merely I, a silhouette
— raskin, Jun 29, 2010
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Damo

15 years 11 months ago

Light in small shadows

Short, sweet, fleeting...like a shadow lost to the shade...every moment a reminder...
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raskin

15 years 11 months ago

cool

I like writing a lady liberty poem around the 4th of July. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Damo

15 years 11 months ago

ohh - thanks for givinbg it

ohh - thanks for givinbg it thgat extra b it of dimension... not being an American, the reference is not immediately recognisable - but now t hat you say it! :-) Hope you had a good Independance Day

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