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R.M.Shanmugam
Jun 29, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Love only a pass time

A man seeks a beauty queenbut compromises with one offered.A woman admires a princebut accepts the one prepared.Dreams abort when they’re betrothed.12.12.2001, pakd
— R.M.Shanmugam, Jun 29, 2010
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Damo

15 years 11 months ago

Choosing choice

Each choice made - countless choices remain unmade...a bird in the hand and all...
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Shan

layers of meaning as usual and that last line could be humorous or not ? depends which way the reader wants to go, a small but smashing piece love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Shan

This piece put me in mind of arranged marriages. As Jayne says,"Layers and Layers." Always, Cat

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