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The truth behind your words

 Your lips unfold your hearth

Empty words of lies

Buckets full of you

The truth of inner reality

The cosmos of your outer world

The unspoken wisdom of your makeup


— Stefan, Jun 30, 2010

Critiques

Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

I’m a bit confused, empty

I'm a bit confused, empty words of lies, or words empty of lies? do they mean the same thing... in the grand scheme of things being what they are? ;-) Nifty* poem. ~A *nifty a word well before my time, even! ~A The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Conservatives is to prevent the mistakes from being corrected. G.K. Chesteron
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

15 years 11 months ago

Do we,

all have wisdom in our make up, or is that just the way we are made, made cleverly that is. Great poem gets us thinking. Regards Roscoe..
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

whitehealer !!

i nearly missed this one i'm having a little difficulty deciphering it - i'm tired, it's early morning here, so i hope that's it i somehow get the message that we make our own reality, or something more spiritual than simply exterior facade verses interior i will come back to it lol good to see you again judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

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