Her Light Is Mine

              Loveliness
         in a simple thought
      her face a shining light
      pure so fresh
a springtime breeze
   She shines her light to me
giving me the warmth of life
A courage I surley need
       To carry me through
      this living dream
   in this perfect Harmony

— mantiscepter, Jul 01, 2010

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Critiques

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Grand Mant

This one out of the ballpark. I connected with it and found it just grand friend..Is it surely??? Love at ya guy Mona xooxo

mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Light

Miss Mona Miss Mona Miss Mona, how are you today. wonderful comments from a wonderful person,. I am sure happy to see you out here, and that you like this short poem. I don't know why, But I wasn't sure if it was.... so my friend, how are things for you,? hopefully well.[ waiting for Ann? ] me too. Love ya, talk soon. John.

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Dear John

Beautiful words from a warm kind fellow. Xena Mrs John x Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Loveliness

Hello my Dear Spouse, How have things been? I've been very busy, with kids. two just moved, and of course I'm like a hub, or a meeting place, doesn't matter how old they are they always find home..... I am glad you liked this poem, and I am just happy to hear from you. Love Hubby.

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

My darling John

What about our kid Zak? Okay, he's got four legs, a very long tail and his finger nails are a bit long and his teeth overlap his top lip, oh; and he chews all my electrical wires, but he's our baby??? But I forgive you. Adopting a pet rat is a full time job, so john; I’ll look after things this end of the world if you take care of your end. Xena Mrs John xxx Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Heya hun

You never disppoint me I am always calmed by your reads this ones just beautiful and the shape is wicked nice job love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Btw was the shape meant to

Btw was the shape meant to be the bust of a woman lol or is that coincidence lol love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

Her light

I can't really tell you truthfully, its just something felt inside, what prompted me to center this is a question, and I've only done it on a few one called love rings- was shaped like a bell!! and another was about an Angel, and in my viewing that's what it looked like to me, so it's a guess.. love ya John

blistered-pen

15 years 11 months ago

To be honest, I liked the

To be honest, I liked the title more than the poem. I was actually drawn in by the title, which I think is great, fantastic. I guess I was kind of hoping for something longer and more possessive since you use 'mine' in the title. Possessive but fearful, maybe insecure in your actual possession of her light. JRS

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