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Flowers Beauteous Wither

Flowers Beauteous Wither

 

Political edifice losing luster

Commotion in all nature

Encroaching on pastures green

Presenting an appalling scene

Jackboots on rampage

Teens up against bondage

Flowers beauteous wither

Thorns prosper.

 

— ishaq, Jul 06, 2010

Critiques

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

hello

nice to meet you. Your language use is expressive and I like the theme. My favorite lines are: jackboots on rampage Teens up against bondage Flowers beauteous wither Thorns prosper. Always, Cat

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