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the guv'mint an' the biz'ness
that so be in damn cahoots;

they pick me britches' pockets,
pawn me momma's lockets,

an' they got me all atremblin'
an' ashakin' in me boots

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— barbsdad2003, Jul 08, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Chuck

I won't get started on the guv'mint' and biz'nis' as it would bee too long to read. Great little poem that says allot. My favorite lines: an’ they got me all atremblin’ an’ ashakin’ in me boots Always, Cat
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Let’s take back *our

Let's take back *our government of the people for the people and by the people* from the pick pockets! Damned if I know how to though, and that's the whole truth, an' nuthin' but the troof. ~ "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh
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barbsdad2003

15 years 11 months ago

Being ...

helpless helps me be pessimistic. A good thing, I think. Especially over recent years. I do think Obama's doing what he can. But the problems---and what might be solutions---stay firmly stuck in government's amazing never-neverland awaiting exploration by the likes of Alice. And as far as industry (Big Corp, in other words)? Ah, don't get me started. I'll not be able to stop. I'm riding a Toyota w/o brakes. Chuck
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Marie-I-Be

15 years 11 months ago

it's

Chuck, before I opened this, I was prepared to suggest that you could use a little help in pulling together more substantial titles for your work. In general, I still think that's true, but on this'n here I'm gonna play a pard'n and slap you a clap on the back for biting off less than you kin chew. Perfect title, nice flow into your timely subject, and very well done on a style unusual for you but somehow strangely befitting your take on politics and such. You're not planning to go rogue Republican, are you?
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barbsdad2003

15 years 11 months ago

Thanx

And as to rogue R? T'ain't likely. I'd be a for-sure misfit among 'em. Chuck
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Marie-I-Be

15 years 11 months ago

Right answer!

How do you spell relief ... :-)
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anonymous1

15 years 11 months ago

Good one, this.

I want to say, gub'mint and bid'ness. Maybe it's just my accent. Lisa
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barbsdad2003

15 years 11 months ago

Thanx, Lisa

And by the way, I've just expounded at some length on a piece of yours. Hope I've not there worn out my welcome(s) as a commenter. In the end, though, no worries. I like your writings. I do, I do. Really. Really do. Hugs, Chuck
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

its

A fond look back to the good old days when they picked our pockets instead of strong arm robbery.Only solution I see is to keep changing "government" until they get the message that they are NOT entitled to their positions.Must go now and dry condensed steam from ears.........scribbler
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barbsdad2003

15 years 11 months ago

I think ...

government's unable to receive messages except in very rare instances. Too bad we need such a thing as government at all. If only those elected would do their job(s) and rein in the corporate overreachers that so endanger health and welfare of us all. Endless subject, this. Thanx for comment, Chuck
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

15 years 11 months ago

Stop voting,

Leave them all out to dry, we have been going along like this for decades. Vote one in, they make changes, and the next one in reverses them. They preserve the status quo, allowing the well to do to have good times no matter how bad we are hurting.Giving to us just enough to keep us quiet, and some of us a glimpse of what we could get. If we shut up and play ball. Great piece it's got my blood racing. Regards Roscoe..
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Marie-I-Be

15 years 11 months ago

disagree, crisp does not apply

Actually, Chuck, "crisp" is a word I had earlier in the late night used to describe a submission by Stan the Scribbler. I don't think your piece here can accurately be characterized as crisp. I think I would label it a wonderfully obscure cottony abbreviated meshed meld. Feel free to agree.
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

cant delete crisp

please do i think as u say its an erroneous assessment of such a wonderful creation thanks

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