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Sigh Of The Beholder

           "Sigh Of The Beholder"
                       Haiku

           spring drops on winter
      nature scene with no make-up
             beautiful mud-slush



— brittle light, Jul 09, 2010

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

hello

An interesting haiku, but I had trouble visualizing the imagery. Keep writing. Always, Cat

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