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Jul 11, 2010
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Zephyrus Dances
Dancing with Zephyrus
in soft velvet skies
the pulse of surrender
swaying the rise
silently drifting,
in love's graceful bliss
remaining aloft
'mid lover's sweet kiss,
'til last warming breath
of Zephyrus' sigh
enters the dream
of those daring to fly:
to dream the dream of
extinguished west wind
'til 'morrow's fresh yearnings
once more begin
— brittle light, Jul 11, 2010
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Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
hello
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Wonderful poem rhythm and
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