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Jul 12, 2010
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Flames dancing their shadows Javanese hand puppets
jumping to sirens no chimes or gongs
burnished joists shift and settle
they're trapped as Bedouins housed
embers vehement they are a witch
spit shoot crackle
not like a New Year sky
and the stranglehold of a ghoul, black smoke
Stillness in this fire glow
swollen dolls
like seals basking in sunshine
no not dolls children saw I, two
deceased increased, heat inflated
to become charred relics of fleeting histories
carbon those ammonite children.
jumping to sirens no chimes or gongs
burnished joists shift and settle
they're trapped as Bedouins housed
embers vehement they are a witch
spit shoot crackle
not like a New Year sky
and the stranglehold of a ghoul, black smoke
Stillness in this fire glow
swollen dolls
like seals basking in sunshine
no not dolls children saw I, two
deceased increased, heat inflated
to become charred relics of fleeting histories
carbon those ammonite children.
— pinksheep, Jul 12, 2010
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Critiques
Ayaz Warith
15 years 11 months ago
Skillful attempt
Orphani
15 years 11 months ago
The intense imagery in this
whitetea
15 years 11 months ago
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pinksheep
15 years 11 months ago
Thank You
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
"999"
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