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Playdate
Why is the grass greener in your back yard
Playing is more fun when your around
I close my eyes and I am there
Close yours too and join me if you dare
Why is your candy sweeter than mine
Spare me one lick of your juicy pop
Then maybe I can figure out the secret ingredient
Then maybe I can win your heart
Why do your flowers aroma hold all the grace
Perfect petals, perfectly placed
Bring me pretty colors, just a few, not a lot
He loves me, he loves me not
Why is your laugh contagious?
Is it the happiness you bring to others
Or maybe it's your magic powers
Either way I’m laughing giggles right on que, right with you
Sometimes I feel like you are going to disappear
Make it as though you were never here
Erase each footprint you left behind
Fly away, just to fly
Well I can be free, free like you
Give me a chance and I will fly to you
If you run, I’ll follow and I’ll keep up too
Either way, if you leave, I’m coming with you
Have you noticed a pattern here
Maybe I’ve been too subtle my dear
What it is that I am trying to translate to you
Is that you are my love, and in following that logic, I love you
Critiques
poewriter58
15 years 11 months ago
Welcome
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Welcome back gal
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Welcome back gal
ziggy
15 years 11 months ago
hi there hello again good to
stavroula
15 years 11 months ago
thank you all so much! i
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Stavroula..
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