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Patrick Tolo
Member since January 12, 2026
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The moment it happened
The moment it happened is drifting in time and in realms unknown to me
Each time I blinked I'd find myself in the different scene
Each second felt like forever and they moment. I said to myself what is really happening
I questioned myself hoping to find answers. But the silence and the confusion In my heart raised the beat. I coudnt hear me except disturbing beat in my veins screaming wake up
And that moment I said.. Wait.. Wait.. What I'm I doing?
And that moment it happened. I shut my eyes and did not open them untill my soul sang song of awareness.. You are dreaming buddy.. And that moment it happened.. I opened my eyes and back to the land I know.. And I realised that I was dreaming
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- January 2026
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"I enjoyed reading your very imaginative poem. I fund it to be exceedingly creative! Always, Cat" -
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The moment it happened
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The moment it happened
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I'm a simple man that was born with extraordinary imaginations and Im able to project what I see in my mind on the canvas and write stories
Location: ZAF
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